I haven't written poetry in a long time and these are a bit older. I would like your comments and advice if you would be so kind as to give them. I'm working on a story so be patient and I'll have what you all really love back until then here is something to wet your... tastebuds.
Out of the bubble filled tub, candles glowing, wrapped in a towel, drying your pretty brown hair I was walking by, I caught a glimpse, Looking so beautiful, I found myself stopping to stand and stare I felt myself drifting off, to romancing you, clearly in my mind, to a place where only lovers go
